I finally did restart the Holy Man. After re-reading what I originally had, I found that I liked everything except the dialog. The characters’ dialog had a lot of affectation… and none of it unique to specific character. This is making the “rewrite” a little tedious. I really like everything else… just not the dialog. …
I’m getting ready to restart the Holy Man. The problem I have right now is that I don’t exactly know what’s going to happen. I know what purpose the story serves, I know who it’s about, and since it’s going to be M/M Romance, I know who gets together… but that little thing people like …